This is the first chapter of a story I wrote, pls leave any feedback. I have more on a site called wattpad so if you like it my username is The_Hawaiian_Sloth

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Answer 1

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great writing

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i also use wattpad and i kind of had writers block but your a talented writer as i read your story and loved it most readers love long chapters so keep that in mind  

Answer 2

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Amazing Story! My only critque, would to have someone else you know check it, or read it aloud. If you do that you can see fi the story makes sense or not. Other than that AMAZING! ::)))

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What does this author think about the issue? Use the T-Chart to compare the perspectives of Dr. King and the clergy in regard to the Birmingham Campaign. Then write two sentences about how the writer of the article most likely felt about the issue.

"Oppressed people cannot remain oppressed forever," King wrote. Blacks were tired of stores and parks closed to their children and themselves. They were tired of police and mob brutality aimed at them for no other reason than the color of their skin. To the black community, "'wait' has almost always meant 'never,'" King wrote.

King praised those few whites who supported desegregation laws and who had joined in protests. But King also wrote that he was disappointed that many white priests, rabbis, and ministers failed to act morally and to support desegregation. King did not want violence and bloodshed, he wrote. But he wanted to change unjust laws and allow black Americans a chance to be accepted in their own country. And he didn't want to wait

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kings praised those few whites who supported dedegration laws who had joined in protest

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what they said

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Do you think people ever questioned or rebelled against the caste system? Why or why not?
please help free brainlist if you get a right

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Answer:

Sorry but I do not know

Explanation:

I’ve not learned about this system but from the looks of it they probably questioned /rebelled against it. The system put people into stereotypes based on their jobs. I could see people in the lower classes being upset by the negative stereotype they were given.

I'm doing an English Paper. Can you name at least 5 reasons Ps4 is Better than Xbox?
If not I understand... And no plagiarizing. Thanks! :D

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Answer:

1. VR

2. Third-Party Exclusivity Deals

3. Better Default Controller

4. More Storage Options

5. Larger Install Base

6. Simpler User Interface

7. Better Overall Performance From Third-Party Games.

Explanation:

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How do you feel about censorship?

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Answer:

its terrible there censoring all the correct things about politics and c0vid on social media especially face*book

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Scattered across the seascape are islands with names like Lizard Island, Pumpkin Island, and Daydream Island.

What is the function of the preposition used in the sentence?

a
The preposition shows direction.

b
The preposition shows location.

c
The preposition shows time.

d
The preposition shows when.

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uhhhhhhhhhhhhh i believe it’s a

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Need an example of Expository Essay of learing from the past Please!!!!!

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yup agree what he said ^

Can someone plz help me I’m being timed!!!

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Answer:

after light

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Answer:

After light will be okay to do.

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Why is it important to complete your own work?
please write a paragraph

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Answer:

It is important because you win points and had good grades so then you can pass to the next grade and its better to complete your homework because first you dont search on the Internet and you write your words and thats better because you express more like yourself.

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which words did Lewis Carroll chose to rhyme with the words below?

Mouse
Denial
Cur
Breath

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Answer:

Explanation:

Denial I'm SRRY for being rude

what does strike mean im confused bc i dont know if it is b or c

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Strike means to hit something

Ca someone plzzz help me with this!

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Answer:

After PROGRAM and after New Zeland

(so sorry if im wrong)

Explanation:

Answer: Guests of the National Science Foundation's Arctic Program, first visit Christchurch, New Zealand to get outfitted in cold weather gear.

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Read this excerpt from Robert Frost’s “Out, Out—.” Which three characteristics of narrative poetry does it contain?

The buzz saw snarled and rattled in the yard
And made dust and dropped stove-length sticks of wood,
Sweet-scented stuff when the breeze drew across it.
And from there those that lifted eyes could count
Five mountain ranges one behind the other
Under the sunset far into Vermont.
And the saw snarled and rattled, snarled and rattled,
As it ran light, or had to bear a load.
And nothing happened: day was all but done.
Call it a day, I wish they might have said
To please the boy by giving him the half hour
That a boy counts so much when saved from work.
His sister stood beside him in her apron
To tell them ‘Supper.’ At the word, the saw,
As if to prove saws knew what supper meant,
Leaped out at the boy’s hand, or seemed to leap—
He must have given the hand. However it was,
Neither refused the meeting. But the hand!

theme
multiple characters
focus on personal emotion
setting
use of dialogue

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Answer:

I beleive that the answers are B, D, and E from what I can remember from the test.

Explanation:

I took the test

In excerpt from Robert Frost’s “Out, Out—.” Which three characteristics of narrative poetry does it contain multiple characters, setting, use of dialogue. Option (b) (d) and (e) are correct.

What do you mean by Dialogue?

Dialogue is a communicative process in which individuals from diverse viewpoints seek to understand one another.

A theme in modern literary studies is the main subject, idea, or message that runs through a story. The two types of themes are thematic concepts and thematic statements, which refer to what the work says about the subject and what viewers "believe the work is about," respectively. The distinction between premises and themes is common.

The most prevalent modern definition of theme is an idea or point that is essential to a narrative and is frequently summed up in a single word (for example, love, death, betrayal). These themes typically include conflicts between the individual and society, adolescence, people and technology, nostalgia, and the perils of unrestrained ambition.

Therefore, Option (b) (d) and (e) are correct. It contain multiple characters, setting, use of dialogue.

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Read this passage from Chapter 9.
“Run!” and drag Waleed and his sister away before the whole building came crashing down into the street, thundering like a jet fighter.


What is the mood of this passage?

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Answer:

urgency

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I say urgency because it seems they were in a rush to run out of the building that was getting ready to collapse

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Based on your reading of Jennifer Buchet’s “Grief Along the Reef,” explain why reefs are in danger of becoming extinct. Provide evidence from the text to support your answer. (150+ words)

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Answer:

They are in danger from coming extinct because of the global threats, like natural disasters, boat groundings, and dragging anchors can ruin the reef and no coral can kill fish by ruing there homes and food.

Explanation:

Soory i can't write 150 words! But there is 34 from that aricle-

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Rudolf and Milena are arguing at lunch about reading quickly. Rudolf mentions that the faster you read, the better the reader you are. Milena disagrees. Explain in two or three sentences ideas from this lesson that will help resolve the argument.


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Being a fast reader can help with efficiently answering comprehension questions. On the other hand, you have to be able tom retain the information you just read. So in conclusion, being a slow reader doesn't make you any worse of a reader and reading speed doesn't really matter but rather your understanding of the text.

Which statement best describes how "Malala the Powerful" and "The Strangers That Came to Town" address the theme that negative experiences can result in positive outcomes?

In "Malala the Powerful," the closure of the girls' schools in Pakistan led to less violence from the Taliban, while in "The Strangers That Came to Town," the Duvitches' hard efforts led them to catch a lot of fish.

In "Malala the Powerful," Malala's move to the U.K. allowed her to attend school safely, while in "The Strangers That Came to Town," the boys' fishing experience led them to be exhausted and covered in mosquito bites.

In "Malala the Powerful," the attack on Malala led to worldwide attention on the issue of girls' education, while in "The Strangers That Came to Town," the boys' harmful prank led them to make amends with the Duvitches.

In "Malala the Powerful," the attention that Malala received as a blogger led to the Taliban knowing her name, while in "The Strangers That Came to Town," the Duvitches' shabby clothes led them to be ostracized by their neighbors.

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Answer: In "Malala the Powerful," the attack on Malala led to worldwide attention on the issue of girls' education, while in "The Strangers That Came to Town," the boys' harmful prank led them to make amends with the Duvitches.

Explanation: The other person is wrong this answer makes more sense

The statement that best describes "Malala the Powerful" and "The Strangers That Came to Town" address the theme that negative experiences can result in positive outcomes is :

C) In "Malala the Powerful," the attack on Malala led to worldwide attention on the issue of girls' education, while in "The Strangers That Came to Town," the boys' harmful prank led them to make amends with the Duvitches.

"Positive outcomes"

The statement that best describes "Malala the Powerful" and "The Strangers That Came to Town" address the theme that negative experiences can result in positive outcomes is :

In "Malala the Powerful," the attack on Malala led to worldwide attention on the issue of girls' education

In "The Strangers That Came to Town," the boys' harmful prank led them to make amends with the Duvitches.

Thus, the correct answer is C.

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How have you demonstrated perseverance?

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Whenever you set a goal! When you do this, you motivate yourself to finish it. Examples of this is on a test, studying, or doing an hobby you enjoy!! (Branliest please??)

Answer:

Clarify your goal.

Explanation:

Base it on your purpose, needs, and abilities.

Intend to achieve your goal.

Maintain optimism.

Live in the present.

Acknowledge your accomplishments.

Try new experiences.  

Care for you mind, body, emotions, and spirit.  

Experience yourself living your goal today.

What the suffix -ism mean in capitalism?
A: Possession
B: System
C: Science
D: Connection

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Answer: Hello! Your answer is hopfully...

I think your answer is B: System.

Hope this helps!♥

System because it's a capitalist system ie capitalism

find the pronoun shift.
A person who has seen a waterspout over Lake Michigan remembers it for the rest of their life.

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Answer:

It goes from Interrogative pronoun, the word who, to a Possessive Pronoun, the word their.

Explanation:

^^^^Yea this is correct I jsut checked!

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Part A

What claim does the author make about binge-watching in the PRO section of the Newsela article "PRO/CON: Binge-Watching"?


Binge-watching can help people avoid conflict.

Binge-watching may improve relationships.

Binge-watching may lead to weight gain due to inactivity.

Binge-watching ruins feelings of anticipation for what comes next.
Question 2

Part B

Which statement accurately assesses the claim identified in Part A?


It is effective because the author provides several examples of how binge-watching increases social connections, and refers to outside sources.

It effective because the author shares first-hand experience of spending more time as a family binge-watching.

It is ineffective because the physical and mental issues associated with binge-watching outweigh the benefits.

It is ineffective because when people are binge-watching, they are focused on the content of the shows, not interactions with others.

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Part A : Binge-watching may improve relationships.

Part B: It is effective because the author provides several examples of how binge-watching increases social connections, and refers to outside sources.

You welcome.

Answer:

Part A - Binge-watching may improve relationships.

Part B - It is effective because the author provides several examples of how binge-watching increases social connections, and refers to outside sources.

Explanation:

I took k12 quiz, but it may be a different answer for you...

Sorry if I'm wrong.

Help me please ELA (Book: The outsiders)

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Answer:

Sodapop hugs Ponyboy, and Darry cries, shocking Ponyboy. ... Ponyboy realizes that Darry does care about him; Darry is strict because he loves Ponyboy and wants him to succeed. Ponyboy runs across the room and embraces his brother, thinking that everything will be fine once he gets home.

Explanation: I found this on the internet Chapter 5-6 page 2

he was wondering what was wrong and what he could do to solve the problem and help him. so after he asked him what was wrong and they talked about after.

What should the name for a pet food business be called?

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Dog chom

Bark and bite

Kitty nibble

Answer:Bones & Stuff

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What is the figure of speech of ''crawls''?

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Answer:

the figure of speech to crawls is VERB!!

Answer:

intransitive verb or just verb

Explanation:

in chapter one of “Lord of the Flies,” the conch shell is a major symbol for something. What does the conch shell represent and how so? Use two pieces of evidence from the text to support your answer.

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Answer:

Image result for in chapter one of “Lord of the Flies,” the conch shell is a major symbol for something. What does the conch shell represent and how so? Use two pieces of evidence from the text to support your answer.

In Lord of the Flies, the conch shell is the first discovery, and it brings the scattered boys together, beginning as a mystical symbol of leadership and order. Ralph uses it to assemble the boys after they are stranded on the island, and as a result, he is elected chief.

help plz!
Which sentence has a past tense verb? *
4 points
She reads, writes, and practices piano every day.
She is already reading, writing, and practicing.
He will run to the store for a tape measure.
He ran to the store for a tape measure.

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Answer:

he ran to the store for a tape measure

Answer:

The answer is D

Explanation:

Ran is something that he already did.

Have you ever been in a situation where you had an opinion on something that was different from the opinion of most of those around you? If so, describe the situation. Why do you think that most people in our society prefer to conform and "go along" with the majority?

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Answer:

Most go with the majority of the answers

Complete the analogy and then describe the type of relationship between the words in each word pair. Make sure your response includes the missing term.

building: city as tree : [ ]

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Park, woods, forest

Refer to the article “From Barter to Bitcoin” in your Money, Money, Money magazine for a complete version of this text.
Based on the information in “From Barter to Bitcoin,” how does replacing coins with paper money improve the way people do business?
It decreases the need for banks and money regulation.
Local governments begin issuing and backing banknotes.
More trade can occur over much greater distances.
Merchants must take precautions to detect counterfeits.

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The answer to the question is C

Replacing coins with paper money improves the way people do business because more trade can occur over much greater distances. The correct option is c.

What is paper money?

Paper money is a country's official, paper currency that is circulated for the transactions involved in acquiring goods and services. The printing of paper money is typically regulated by a country's central bank or treasury in order to keep the flow of funds in line with monetary policy.

Paper money tends to be updated with new versions that contain security features and attempt to make it more difficult for counterfeiters to create illegal copies. The first recorded use of paper money was purported to be in the country of China during the 7th century A.D. as a means of reducing the need to carry heavy and cumbersome strings of metallic coins to conduct transactions.

Similar to making a deposit at a modern bank, individuals would transfer their coins to a trustworthy party and then receive a note denoting how much money they had deposited.

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Can you guys help me please :) this math btw

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30 is the answer because it is 1/4 of 120 so yeah when you divide it it’s 30
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