Jordan is proofreading his personal narrative.

Which tasks are most appropriate for Jordan to do while proofreading?

Select each correct answer.

A. Read his work aloud to listen for missing or extra words.

B Identify inappropriate shifts in verb tense.

C Change description to dialogue.

D Determine whether the pacing of events makes sense..

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Answer 1

Answer:

A) Read his work aloud to listen for missing or extra words.

D) Determine whether the pacing of events makes sense.

Maybe: B) Identify inappropriate shifts in verb tense.

Explanation:

I am positive that A) and D) are correct. Answer B) can apply, however, this question is asking about proofreading.

Answer 2
A. B. And D. I believe these are the correct answers

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20 PTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE ONLY A DAY
Submit your paragraph (5 - 7 sentences) about a time when you did something that you knew was right, even if others did not follow. Use as many of your spelling words as you can, and double-check that they are spelled correctly. Make sure to underline your spelling words when you use them.

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This one should be easy. We would not know what to write so this is hard to help
There has been several times in my life that I have done something that I knew was right, even though others didn’t follow. One of these was when I was about eleven. There was a girl that was staying in my neighborhood for a while, who was very kind. Unfortunately, my friends in the area were not so nice to her. They basically bullied her, constantly mocking everything she said and making snarky comments about everything she did. One day, they went way too far with it. While she was on her bike, riding it peacefully down the street, minding her own business, they hit her with their bikes and pushed her into a thorn bush. She was home alone, and had no one to help her with her cuts. After the other girls left, I wandered over to her, and offered help. She gratefully accepted it, and thanked me for never bullying her like they did. I brought her to my back porch, carrying band-aids and a wet washcloth out of my house. I helped her clean her cuts, washing them out first. We are still good friends, and hang out almost every day. The other girls are regretful about what happened, and managed to apologize eventually. They’re not exactly friends, but don’t bully her anymore. That is one of quite a few times that I have done what I know is the right thing, even though others didn’t follow- in the beginning, at least.

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Item 1
Read the excerpt from “The Red-Headed League.”

“I went round to the offices, but no one had ever heard of the Red-Headed League or Mr. Duncan Ross. I did not wish to lose such a place without a struggle, and so,” concluded Jabez Wilson, “as I had heard that you give advice to poor folk who need it, I came right away to you.”

“And you did very wisely,” said Holmes. “Your case is remarkable. I shall be happy to look into it. From what you have told me, I think graver problems hang from it than might at first sight appear. Tell me, what is he like, this assistant of yours who first called your attention to the advertisement, this Vincent Spaulding?”

“Small, stout-built, very quick in his ways, no hair on his face, around thirty years old. Has a white splash of acid on his forehead.”

Holmes sat up in his chair. “I thought as much,” said he. “Have you ever observed that his ears are pierced for earrings?”

“Yes, sir. He told me that a gypsy had done it for him when he was a lad.”

“Hum!” said Holmes, sinking back, deep in thought. “And he has cared well for your business while you were away?”

Question 1
Part A

Which conclusion can be drawn, based on the details in the excerpt?


Holmes is a part of the Red-Headed League.

Spaulding wants to help Mr. Wilson succeed.

The Red-Headed League is a fake business.

Holmes doubts Mr. Wilson is telling the truth.
Question 2
Part B

Which quotation from the text best supports the answer to Part A?


"'...as I had heard that you give advice to poor folk who need it, I came right away to you.’”

“’I went round to the offices, but no one had ever heard of the Red-Headed League or Mr. Duncan Ross.’”

“’And you did very wisely,’ said Holmes. ‘Your case is remarkable. I shall be happy to look into it.’”

“’Tell me, what is he like, this assistant of yours who first called your attention to the advertisement, this Vincent Spaulding?’”

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Answer:
1) The Red-Headed League is a fake business
2) “I went round to the offices, but no one had ever heard of the Red-Headed League or Mr. Duncan Ross.”

Hope this helps you! :)

Which of the following does not reflect the first step of effective communication?
a.
picking a topic for discussion
b.
clarifying the reason for today’s meeting
c.
setting goals for the project
d.
asking for feedback on the project’s progress

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Answer:

I belive its D

Explanation:

How can I rewrite this sentence? ms. laut got make way for ducklings at the library

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Ms. Laugh has to make way for the ducklings at the library.

At the library,Ms. Laut has to make way flor ducklings.

which sentence best describes the purpose of the stage directions underlined on page 3 the breakthrough

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Will need a picture of question

HELP ASAP In which situation would a speaker need to look directly into the camera rather than from person to person?

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Answer:

When presenting remotely.

Answer: The answer is C. When presenting remotely.

Explanation:

What is terminology?
definitions that appear in dictionaries
unknown words that you find in the dictionary
special language used to talk about a specific topic
reference books, such as encyclopedias and dictionaries

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special language used to talk about specific topics
Special language used to talk about a specific topic. Hope this helps(:

Read the paragraph from the Newsela article "PRO/CON: Binge-Watching?" and note the boldface evidence to support the main argument.

"John Mayer is a psychologist. He says, "We are all bombarded with stress from everyday living, and with the nature of today's world where information floods us constantly. It is hard to shut our minds down and tune out the stress and pressures." Binge-watching acts "like a steel door," he says. It blocks our brains from thinking about those constant stressors that force themselves into our thoughts."

The main argument is that binge-watching helps to reduce stress.

Which answer best uses the evidence to evaluate the main argument?

Question 8 options:

The argument is effective because the evidence from an expert illustrates how binge-watching relieves stress.


The argument is ineffective because the evidence fails to explain how binge-watching harms the brain.

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Answer:

Explanation:

I believe the correct answer is the second option - The argument is ineffective because the evidence fails to explain how binge-watching harms the brain.

This can be assumed as the title of the article reads "PRO/CON: Binge-Watching?" although in the article, there are no cons of binge watching explained, it just explains what the brain does when one binge watches and how this relieves stress.

I believe is the second one to because I did this in class

Tuesday: Vocabulary: Use your computer or a dictionary to look up the definition of these words from our novel.

taut
foliage
solemn
jubilant
fleeting

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Answer:

taut: stretched or pulled tight; not slack.

foliage: plant leaves collectively.

solemn: formal and dignified.

jubilant: feeling or expressing great happiness and triumph.

fleeting: lasting for a very short time.

taut : stretched or pulled tight
foliage : the leaves of a plant
solemn performed with full ceremony
jubilant : joyful and rejoicing
fleeting : not lasting

Identify two ways that the characters in the text seem like real people.

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Can you share the text with me?
Hey sure . Could you give the text

Which statement is the best synthesis of information from these two sources?
Source 1: House plants can add beauty to a room, particularly during the winter months.

Source 2: Houseplants have been shown to help clean the air inside a home.


A.Houseplants are a affordable way to decorate a space if there is enough light.

B. Having houseplants that are easy to care for is a simple way to help keep the air inside a home clean.

C. Placing several houseplants together on a windowsill that gets at least some sun can be a nice touch.

D. Houseplants provide a source of beauty may also offer health benefits to residents.

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Answer:D

Explanation: has both sources if evidence provided as evidence for answer

Answer:

benefits to residents

Explanation:

When the Yeehats follow the moose movement, what is the area they now avoid?

Group of answer choices

A. The river where the gold is at.

B. The valley where Thornton was killed.

C. The mountain ridge by their enemies camp.

D. Dawson.

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

hope this right

I think that the answers a

Will give brainly to who gets it correct

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Answer:

c

Explanation:

Answer: I think the answer might be D


Hope this helps :>


Sorry if it doesn’t

Explanation:

Francois and Perrault sell Buck and the other dogs to __________.

Group of answer choices

A. The Man in the Red Sweater

B. Judge Miller

C. A Scotch Half-Breed

D. The Mighty Quinn

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C. A Scotch Half-Breed
Answer: A Scotch Half-Breed.


Text: “Buck's new owner is a "Scotch half-breed" and is known only by that name; he is the driver of the mail team over the trail to Dawson.”

Imagine being in New York City and exploring all the city has to offer. Write a story about a character's adventure in New York City.

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Answer:

It was a beautiful day in New York City.  The sun shone off of the giant skyscrapers. People in fancy suits and dresses rushed off with their briefcases in their hand and their phone in the other. I glanced around. I walked until I made it to a crosswalk. Once the light turned to let the pedestrians walk including me, a giant crowd of people pushed and shoved to insure they would get off the street in one piece. My phone started ringing. I had an alarm for 12:00 p.m. to find a place to eat lunch. I looked around for any cafes or restaurants. There was a place called Pasty's Pizzaria. I started walking again until I was stopped in my tracks. It was a large crowd huddled around something. I stepped closer through the crowd to see a man playing a saxophone. People started dancing and filling his case with spare change that they had. I smiled and dropped a dollar. When I made it for lunch, I ordered a small extra cheese and veggie pizza. When I got my pizza, I sat down at one of the dine-in tables. I opened the box, and the smell of fresh crust soothed my stomach. I ate a piece, and it tasted like heaven. The warm cheesy delight melted on my tongue, and the crunchiness from the vegetables and the flaky crust went hand and hand. When I was done, I went further into the city. I stopped at multiple boutiques. In New York, there was a very unique style. I walked into the Disney store and bought myself a Stitch and a Chewbacca plushie. When I left, the sun started to set, so I rushed back to the hotel I was staying at. When I got back, I stared out my window. All the lights made the city so welcoming. Then, I plopped down in bed, wanting to explore even more the next day.

Explanation:

I wrote this on my own. I didn't copy and paste. Feel free to edit!

The city’s bright lights blocked out the stars as I walked through the streets of New York City. Neon billboard advertising anything and everything. Taxis lined the roads.

I made this up(: I hope you can use it to start writing your story!

Which sentences from “The Bridge” most relate to the theme that one’s background often has an impact on one’s beliefs?

A. What I mean is, they don’t get me. If they tried for a hundred million years, they couldn’t begin to comprehend my feelings and my dreams.
B. This isn’t because they’re insensitive, you understand, but because they didn’t grow up here. They grew up on the other side of the globe, in India.
C. You’d think my parents would have some understanding of how much I love music, wouldn’t you? They think music is just something extra in my life.
D. They expect me to get into an A-list college and then become a businessman or a scientist or a doctor or an engineer – that’s their plan. That is what will make them proud."

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Answer:

B. This isn't because they're insensitive, you understand, but because they didn't grow up here. They grew up on the other side of the globe, in India.

it is b merch on my dead cuzins

PLEASE HELP o(TヘTo)
How did Japanese-Internment camps affect American lives in the present day?

Give me at least 3 reasons please it would help a lot.
And if you get your answer from a website(s) please list them (also it would be much appreciated if they were .edu or .gov sites)

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Answer:

Within the camps, Japanese Americans endured dehumanizing conditions including poor housing and food, a lack of privacy, inadequate medical care, and substandard education.

Explanation:

poor housing and food, lack of privacy, and inadequate medical

Which political party wanted the expansion of enslavement into the territories during the 1860 election?

A. Constitutional Union Party

B. Southern Democratic Party

C. Republican Party

D. Northern Democratic Party

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B southern democratic party is the answer
B. southern democratic party is the answer

Refer to your Expeditions in Literature and The Adventure of the Six Napoleons for a complete version of each text.


How are “The Adventure of the Three Students” and The Adventure of the Six Napoleons different?


Select the two correct answers.



Several people commit crimes in “The Adventure of the Three Students,” but in The Adventure of the Six Napoleons, only one person commits a crime.


In the first story, Holmes takes the case to help a friend; in the second story Holmes takes the case because he is bored.


In the first story, no one is physically harmed, but in the second story, someone is murdered as part of the case.


Holmes solves the case without the police in “The Adventure of the Three Students," but in The Adventure of the Six Napoleons, Holmes works the case with Inspector Lestrade.

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Answer:

its C and D :)))

Explanation:

answer:

its d and c

Explanation:

I NEED A TRUE ASWER IT CANNOT BE WRONG OR ELSE I FAIL

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Answer:

Answer D ;)

Explanation:

The thesis is your argument, your opinion, and your point. It is what you have to prove in your paper.

D, a thesis is a statement that proves your argument

An advice column called "Dear Abby" appears in many papers every day; therefore, it is called a ? feature.

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Answer:

the answer would be

syndicated

The answer above is correct

why do people force their religion on others?

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Because it gives them a sort of “authority” making others believe that they are the truthful ones and nobody else can be.
Many people believe that it is disrespectful to have different ideas than those of the religion that they follow. They want to show their entire faith to their God, by trying to have other people join them in their worship.

My aunt Jackie is a published author.
It is about the murder of an Egyptian king.


Which sentence is incorrect? (Only one answer)

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The second sentence is incorrect because there is no subject. We don’t know what “it” is.
The second sentence is incorrect! The correct format for these sentences would be “My aunt Jackie is a published author. Her book is about the murder of an Egyptian king.”

A student is hiking through a marsh taking pictures for science class. Which of the following would most likely be an example of human impact on Earth?
a drainage ditch to drain water A.
В. river water eroding a river bank an
eagle nest made of dead branches C.
D. a group of dragonflies sitting on a rock ​

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A. A drainage ditch to drain water

A:  A drainage ditch to drain water

Please help, this is hard for me. :c

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Answer:

Explanation:

Lets go crocodiles! So I know < and > can seem complicated, but lets try to simplify it! The crocodile always wants to eat the bigger number, so the open side < will always face the bigger one! A is your variable, it just means the possible amounts that may be put in the place of A!

Ex: smaller<bigger       bigger>smaller

Alexa has at least $201 dollars in her banking account. If theres a chance the numbers may be the same you're going to add _ to it! This means less/greater than or equal to! So for Alexa's equation the answer is going to be

Now in B the auditorium can hold 400 people at most, so theres going to be under 400, or 400 people! This means the sign is going to be

Amarillo had less than 3 inches of snow which means it can't be equal to three! <

Andre baked over 6 pies for the bake sale which means he could not have baked 6 pies or anything less! >

Astronaughts need to have at least 7 years of training, they could stop there or they could continue! This means that the amount of years is greater than or equal to!

Less than 11 people fot an a, this means that there could not have been 11 people, so a is going to be <

Here you go brainliest answer please

What is harmony?
chords
horizontal notes
occurring at the same time
melodic lines

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Harmony mean occurring at the same time. In music this creates melodic lines but the word can be used outside of music as well to mean occurring at the same time.

Article: Air pollution has many components, like the emission of greenhouse gases that lead to climate change. Carbon dioxide from burning fossil fuels and changes in land use; nitrous oxide from the increased use of fertilizers; and methane from irrigated rice agriculture, cattle, and landfills are changing climate at a rate faster than most changes seen in the geologic record.
___________________________________________________________________
Article Questions: (5 pts each) → (15 pts total)
1) What did you learn?
2) What is causing this impact?
3) Who/what is being affected?

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Answer:

1) the one thing I learned or notice from this Social studies article is that when a air pollution is that a components of greenhouse are gases the use as a lead that lead to change in climate or fossil fuels

2) This causing impact means when increased use of fertilizers that faster than geologic

Which best describes Toby’s role on the plantation in The People Could Fly?
HELP ASAPP!!!!
A. He refuses to help other enslaved people escape.

B. He oversees enslaved people as they work.

C. He helps other enslaved people escape.

D. He gives other enslaved people magical powers.

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He helps other enslaved people escape.
The answer is C for your question

It is important for a final presentation to be _____. Select the two correct answers.

informal, wordy, opinionated, unbiased, or concise?

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concise and unbiased, if your presentation is biased it may come across as opinion and not facts

[30 POINTS!]
Read the dictionary entry.

eliminate

\ i-ˈli-mə-ˌnāt \

transitive verb

1. get rid of

2. leave out

3. completely destroy

4. remove from competition

Read the sentence.

In order to win the one-on-one basketball tournament, Johnny knew that he had to eliminate all the other players.

Which definition clarifies how eliminate is used in the sentence?


Definition 1

Definition 2

Definition 3

Definition 4

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Answer:

Definition 4 is the answer.

The answer is definition 4.
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