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Mr. Lorry is a very loyal person. He escorted Dr.Mannet out of France, He helped Dr.Manette during his relapse and he helped his telsons bank customers escape out of France safely.

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Mr. Lorry is a very loyal person. He escorted Dr. Mannet out of France, and he helped Dr. Manette during his relapse. Mr. Lorry also helped his telsons bank customers escape out of France safely.

That's a little bit better. I think you should elaborate on that last part a little more, but otherwise it was just a couple things.

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Can someone help me write this story

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Answer:

I went on holiday and I stayed in this house. It was really creepy... (continue)

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Is it ever appropriate for schools to monitor students' social media and restrict their freedom of speech? why or why not?

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Answer: no and yes

Explanation:

I think that because some kids post inappropriate stuff and some don’t but just to be safe all schools monitor kids just to make sure that everything is ok with them.

When readers apply information from a news report to the text they are reading in order to understand its central ideas, what kind of connection are they making?

Otext-to-text
O text-to-self
Otext-to-news
Otext-to-world​

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A: text-to-text

EXPLANATION:

This scenario shows that you are comparing the information from the news report to the book they are reading.

The news report is a text

and so is the book

so it is a text to text relationship

Read the excerpt from Suffragists' "Great Demand" Banner.

The picketing was amplified on Sunday, March 4, 1917, the day of Wilson’s second inaugural, when the Congressional Union for Woman Suffrage and the National Woman’s Party organized a demonstration to "encircle the President’s Mansion with a chain of purple, white and gold.” In spite of a drenching rain, more than one thousand people came out to stand in silent vigil for several hours. A mile or so away, Jeannette Rankin of Montana took her seat in the House of Representatives as the first woman to be elected to the U.S. Congress.

According to the passage, which event spurred the demonstration around the President’s Mansion?

a drenching rainstorm
the election of Jeannette Rankin
an increase in picketing downtown
the inauguration of President Wilson

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Answer: the inauguration of president Wilson

Explanation: just took the test

Answer:

its b

Explanation:

i got it right

What is the central idea or claim in "The Bridge Only You Can Build"?

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Answer:

Distractions are a part of life that young writers need to avoid. ОО

hope this helps

Explanation:

Answer: Young writers should believe that they important have stories to tell.

Explanation: Took the quiz and got it right.

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How does the hasty generalization in the passage
oversimplify the evidence?
Read the passage and answer the question that follows.
Teachers should really think about the amount of math
homework they assign to their students. All types of
learners hate homework. If a student already knows how
to work the math, why do they need to practice it over
and over? And, students who don't get it" in class end up
practicing incorrectly over and over, leading to an
extreme dislike for school. I think requiring just a few
practice problems is more appropriate for students.
It suggests that everyone is good at math already.
It implies that teachers do not understand students.
It forgets that students can ask for help with
homework.
It ignores the fact that some learners might like or
benefit from homework.

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Answer:The hasty generalization fallacy is sometimes called the over-generalization fallacy. It is basically making a claim based on evidence that it just too small. Essentially, you can't make a claim and say that something is true if you have only an example or two as evidence.

Explanation:

Answer:

D

Explanation:

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Which of the following would be a good supporting sentence for a cause-and-
effect paragraph that introduces a cause in the topic sentence?
A. A sentence that notes an effect that resulted from that cause
O B. A sentence that restates the topic sentence in different words
O C. A sentence that explains how to break the cause-and-effect
relationship
OD. A sentence that introduces another cause

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a sentence that notes an effect that resulted from that cause

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1. Cell division is when a parent cell divided and creates 2 child cells.
2. A sperm meets an egg cell, fertilizing jt. It moves into the uterine lining. A fertilized egg divides, forms the morula, five days after fertilization it becomes a blastocyst, and the outer layer forms the placenta.
3. Cells divide to replace old, dead or injured cells. they divide to produce more so you can grow.
4. Sexual and asexual reproduction is living, where sexual requires 2 parents mixing genetic material to fertilize an egg and asexual being a child cell becoming an identical, split off copy of the parent. Non living things replicate or form from chemical reactions, like ideas or rocks.
5. chromosomes double because you inherit 23 from your mom and 23 from your dad. they double so they can separate and form the child.
6.the action or process of fertilizing an egg, female animal, or plant, involving the fusion of male and female gametes to form a zygote.
7. i kind of answered this in 4. sexual reproduction takes 2 parents to make genetically unique offspring, asexual makes an identical copy of the parent.
8. prophase, metaphase, anaphase, telophase.
9. chromosomes?
10. gametes are haploid cells with one set of chromosomes needed for reproduction. somatic cells have 2 sets of chromosomes and are diploid cells.
11. They are types of asexual reproduction.
12. In asexual reproduction the parent and child are identical.

Read the passage from "The Lady, or the Tiger.”

As the youth advanced into the arena he turned, as the custom was, to bow to the king, but he did not think at all of that royal personage. His eyes were fixed upon the princess, who sat to the right of her father. Had it not been for the moiety of barbarism in her nature it is probable that lady would not have been there. . . .

The author builds suspense in the passage by

speeding up the action.
slowing down the action.
revealing the king’s thoughts.
revealing the princess’s thoughts.
PLEASE HELP!!!

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Answer:

b) slowing down the action

Explanation:

The author builds suspense in the passage by slowing down the action.

What is Suspense?

This refers to the use of literary elements in order to create doubt and uncertainty about the next thing which would happen in a story.

With this in mind, we can see that by slowing down the action, the narrator helps to build the suspense when he is narrating the events of the youths advancing to the arena.

Read more about "The Lady, or the Tiger.” here:

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I need a 4 Othello decision quotes

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She loved me for the dangers I had passed, ...

He said: I am very busy now

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the answer is:he said that he was very busy then

Jason is writing a research paper on how caffeine affects the brain. Which source would provide the best information?

(A and C are wrong so pick from B and D please)

A. an audiobook about coffee

B. an interview with a coffee shop owner

C. a magazine article about soda drinking

D. an article with scientific research about brain development

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Answer:

D- it contains facts that are verified and from reputable sources

Compare/Contrast “There Will Come Soft Rains” (poem) to the article “ Life Isn’t fair.. deal with it

Questions:

1. What is the common theme between the two texts?

2. Pull a Line or phrase from Each text that is comparable in meaning.

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Explanation:

1)There will come soft rains is aPoem

while Life isn't fair to deal with is an article

2)the poem is kind of similar to the article

Guys pleas someone help me in this Grammer question ​

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Answer:

1. let down

2.respectful

3.fake

4.sit on

5. engage

Explanation:

Answer:

Deceive means to trick.

Explanation:

By using the context clues given "when he gave me the wrong asnwers to my questions?¨ we can see that Mason tricked the unknown person and deceived him.

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Why is it important to identify sources as primary or secondary, and how does the classification affect how the source is used in a research paper?

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Answer:

Primary sources provide raw information and first-hand evidence. ... A primary source gives you direct access to the subject of your research. Secondary sources provide second-hand information and commentary from other researchers. Examples include journal articles, reviews, and academic books.

Explanation:

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Choose all the answers that apply.
Jupiter:

rotates upside-down
is the largest planet
is the most massive planet
is the least dense planet
has retrograde rotation

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Answer:

Largest, most massive, and has retrograde rotation.

Explanation:

Saturn is the least dense planet and it doesn't rotate upside-down

HELP ASAP EASY EXTRA POINTS WILL MARK BRAINLIEST ASAP

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Answer:

I think its B. I hope this helped im really sorry if you get it wrong.

Explanation:

Answer:

D.

Explanation:

Because a parallels adverb are just synonyms next to each other. Hurriedly and frantically are synonyms, and they are right next to each other.

I need some help plz
1) Which of the following describes shifts in writing?

A, he relationship between the subject of the sentence and the verb

B, the verb form that shows the manner in which the verb expresses an idea in a sentence

C, changes in the person who is doing the action in a sentence

D, unnecessary changes in the form of the verbs within a sentence

2) Why should abrupt shifts in writing be avoided?

A, They convey the attitudes and ideas expressed in the sentence.

B, They create consistency in voice.

C, They are difficult to correct.

D, They are confusing and can make writing or a conversation difficult to follow.

3) Which sentence has a verb in the passive voice?

A, My dog likes steak for dinner.

B, He appears to be in the wrong place.

C, We went to the store.

D, Mistakes were made by the president.

4) In which voice is the subject performing the action of the verb?(1 point)

A, indicative

B, passive

C, subjunctive

D, active

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Answer:

Explanation:

1) C. A and B are not shifts and D specifically says the changes are unnecessary.

2) D. A and B are both positive things and C is simply wrong.

3) D. A, B, and C put the topic of the sentence before what the topic does. These are all active voice. Passive voice puts the action before the action-doer like in D.

4) 90% sure this is D for the reasons I stated in 3.

Answer:

1) Unnecessary changes in the form of the verbs within a sentence.

2) They are confusing and can make writing or a conversation difficult to follow.

3) Mistakes were made by the president.

4) active

Explanation:

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PLEASE ANSWER ASAP
RIDDLE:
I HAVE MANY KEYS BUT NONE OPEN ANY DOOR
HINT: ANSWER IS NOT A MUSICAL KEY

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Answer:

Key board?

Explanation:

A Piano? Cause you know it has keys

What is the similarities of block and modified bloack and semi block style?

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Answer:

The body includes most of the content of your letter. In block or modified block format, each paragraph begins at the left margin. In semi-block format, the paragraphs are still left justified, but the first line of each paragraph is indented by one tab (five spaces). Include a line of space between each paragraph.

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Answer:

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Explanation:

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Write, agree or disagree after each statement then write a sentence or two about why you agree or disagree. If you don’t know which side you are on explain why you cannot decide.

Every person possesses courage.

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Answer:

I agree. I agree because everybody will have the confidence at one point in there life to do something. If someone had no courage they would never be able to accomplish anything. Even people who are super shy and seem like they have no friends, they have the courage to still go to school everyday and go through that stressful school environment. Every person possess courage even if they don't think they have it.

Explanation:

Answer:

I agree. I agree because everybody will have the confidence at one point in there life to do something. If someone had no courage they would never be able to accomplish anything. Even people who are super shy and seem like they have no friends, they have the courage to still go to school everyday and go through that stressful school environment. Every person possess courage even if they don't think they have it.

Explanation:

During the editing phase of the writing process, a writer's main focus is _____. brainstorming new topics elaborating on ideas creating a useable draft proofreading for errors

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Answer:

During the editing phase of the writing process, a writer's main focus is proofreading for errors.

Explanation:

The writing process consists of many phases, the last one being the editing and proofreading phase. At this stage, the writer has already brainstormed, drafted, and elaborated on ideas. The work is practically done, but it needs polishing. At this point, the writer should focus on removing whatever is unnecessary, polishing vocabulary, watching out for wordiness and, of course, finding and correcting errors.

Answer:

catching and correcting errors in punctuation

Explanation:

Whos a better rapper?
Popsmoke or KingVon?

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Answer:

both

Explanation:  i love both of their music i can't real chose

Answer:

Pop smoke hands down

Explanation:

I say this because King Von aint really all that yes he made one good song but pop smoke made a whole lot of other good songs like mood swings, somthing special, what you know about love, actually the whole shoot for the stars albums

Can anyone help me with a summary for Matilda? Thank you

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Answer:

a Roald Dahl work tells the story of Matilda Wormwood, a gifted girl forced to put up with a crude, distant father and mother. Matilda Wormwood is an exquisite and intelligent little girl. Unfortunately, Matilda is misunderstood by her family because she is very different from their ways of life.

Explanation:

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Prompt:
"I never want to be anything more than I am; what I don't have, I don't need."
~ Louis Armstrong, jazz musician of the Harlem Renaissance
Based on this quote, what is Mr. Armstrong's world view, or to put it another way, how does Mr. Armstrong look at life?
Why do you explain this quote in this way? Do you agree with his outlook?Why or why not?

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Based on the quote, “I never want to be anything more than I am; what I don’t have, I don’t need,” Mr. Armstrong thinks that we should be grateful for what we have in life. If life gives you something, you deserve what you have and don’t need anything more. I explain the quote this way because he is basically saying that he doesn’t want to be anything better than himself, and he doesn’t need anything more in life than what he already has. I do not agree with his outlook on life because some good people are living in poverty, and they don’t deserve to live that way of life.

I hope this helps you get caught up. I know what it’s like to be behind. :)

50 POINTS Read the sentence. The iridescence of the jewels in the moonlight was so breathtaking that I was unable to look away from their shine. What is the meaning of the word iridescence in the sentence? O low light O strong influence O colorful gleam O powerful hold​

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Iridescence in this sentence refers to showing luminous colors throughout different angles.

Answer:

COLORFUL GLEAM

Explanation:

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Most pitches should be sent to the copy writer of a newspaper, magazine, or online publication to get selected.

True
False

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The answer would beFalse

Answer:

I believe this is False

Explanation:

Here are the steps:

Get right to the point. Let your potential editor know what they're getting right at the top. ...

Provide a hook. ...

Make it easy to contact you. ...

Link to writing samples. ...

Offer a proposed deadline alongside your article idea. ...

Wait a few weeks, then follow up if you don't hear back.

2. Eliza ran to the store, then she bought some candy. fix the comma splice

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Answer:

Eliza ran to the store; then she bought some candy.

OR

Eliza ran to the store. Then, she bought some candy.

OR

Eliza ran to the store. Then she bought some candy.

Explanation:

I don't do this, so I'm not 100% sure which is correct.

My bad.

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Although both documents were intended to persuade, the styles of The Declaration of Independence and thePreamble were different because _____.

a. Jefferson used rhetorical language in The Declaration of Independence

b. Madison and the Committee of Style used rhetorical language in the Preamble

c. Jefferson's audience consisted of the colonists, and was therefore, limited

d. the audience of the Preamble was limited to delegates, or government representatives

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Answer: D

Explanation: the audience of the preamble was limited to delegates or government representatives

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